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Saturday, March 3, 2012

Alrighttt!

With the help of someone named "Dee",  I think I know where this poem could be going!
I only wrote the beginning part & edited a few things.

Drops of rose drip from her noise
onto the field of Black
among the haze and fiery glaze
she laid there on her back

Wondering why and what to do
the pain kept coming back
once again, she would go through
 moments before the attack


Why did it happen?
how could he become so cruel?
burnin' up all their vivid memories
and playing her like his little fool


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6 comments:

  1. lol 8) nice poem
    here's my new blog;

    http://sssxxx-272.blogspot.com/ ☺

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  2. haha ☺ this "Dee" sounds like a wannabe "ZeeZeeZeeCazi" xD

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    1. if you're the girl who helped me then... thanks... xD

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    2. lol! ☺ sounds a bit like cookie tho ...lol

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    3. hey! how u make the flo slide show?? its cool! 8) im not fond of her music but she is pretty!

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    4. I think just go to where you find slideshow and under "keyword" I typed in florence... they found the pictures under photobucket! :]

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